Definition: a sedoka is a 6-line Japanese form composed of two tercets, with a syllabic count of 5, 7, 7, 5, 7, 7. There is no specified rhyme scheme.
these walls grow whiter ;
nourishing the squatters [we] ;
the roof cannot contain [us ] ;
moisture/tears : spoil wood .
mold/years : chew corners.{softly}
: a (h)ouse is No Longer (H)ome .
these walls grow whiter ;
nourishing the squatters [we] ;
the roof cannot contain [us ] ;
moisture/tears : spoil wood .
mold/years : chew corners.{softly}
: a (h)ouse is No Longer (H)ome .
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